Wednesday, November 14, 2012

Writing Samples - Fall 2013 cont.

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My Survivor

That day is forever engraved into my brain. My dad pulled into the driveway. Ryan and Abby were in the passenger seat. The minute my dad walked into the house, I saw the look on his face. I just stared at him and screamed “NO!”

My heart was beating at rapid pace. My eyes welled up. My world fell apart. How could this happen? Why Cheryl? I didn’t want to believe it, and part of me was hoping it was a nightmare. It was too soon for her to be taken from us.

A survivor is someone who carries on despite hardships or trauma.

A survivor is someone who perseveres.

A survivor is someone who copes with a trauma or a setback.

She was a survivor. Our survivor. My survivor.

Breast cancer.
           
Stage three—normally the stage that no one can survive.

Cheryl had breast cancer from the day I first met her when she moved into the back apartment of my families first home, until the day she died. Stage three breast cancer took her away from my family and I forever on April 12, 2010. Two and a half months before she could’ve watched me get my high school diploma.

Throughout my entire life she was struggling to fight the disease. She had been a survivor, and than suddenly it came back stronger than ever. It took all of the life out of her until she was in a private hospital room trying to fight for more time.

She didn’t want to have any visitors. She didn’t want her son Ryan or her husband Larry to even see her in the condition she was in.

A private room in Greenwich Hospital in the beginning of April was where she was fighting for more time.

She knew the time was getting closer where God would have to take her away from us and she didn’t want anyone in the room with her the night she knew was her last. She passed away peacefully in her sleep after putting up a fight against breast cancer for eighteen years of her life.

For eighteen years Cheryl had it worse off than anyone else that I have ever met. But from an outsider’s point of view, no one would ever be able to point out that she was suffering. I cannot find a moment in time where I saw Cheryl without a smile on her face. The sight of her smile is forever imprinted in my memory of her.

Long weekends were her favorite—she took it as an excuse to always have her family and friends over, especially in the summer around the pool. I cannot count the number of late summer nights I spent around the fire pit next to the pool roasting marshmallows and enjoying laughs. Our two families were one family.

Her husband was my second dad. Her son, I considered to be my own brother. We were family without the blood relation to each other.

Walking through the door of your house just doesn’t feel right anymore. It feels like something is missing. An empty and hollow feeling fill all of the rooms. Why the hell are you gone?

Ironic that I am writing this today. Today being the twelfth of the month. 2 years and 6 months since you’ve been gone. 910 days that Ryan has had to wake up without his mother there. He turned sixteen in May and she would be so proud of the amazing man he is growing up to be.

Not a second, minute, hour or day go by where she doesn’t cross my mind. I hate that she was taken from me. How could someone take away such an amazing person from all of her family and friends? It was not her time to go. She was a survivor. She was our survivor. She was my survivor.

Her memory forever lives on in her parents, her sister, her husband, her son, my parents, my sister, and myself. Cheryl’s Peep’s is a team that her sister Cindy put together. A team that walks in every Susan G. Komen walk to help raise money for breast cancer.

I do not understand why the hell she was taken from us, but she is no longer suffering. She will forever be a survivor in my mind and in my heart.

Assignment: To write a piece about someone who has it worse off than you do, and define a word in the piece.
**This is from Creative Writing**

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